Teacher feedback.
- WWW: clear overview/wider context. Some good comparisons + quotes
- EBI: not enough media analysis - TV representations , more textual analysis of specific images
- I'm aiming for 30 (c)
Targets
- I will change my footnotes to make them look more clean and organised.
- I will also ensure that the correct layout is used
- I will ensure that I improve my punctuation and grammar is certain areas
- I'm also planning to include more media terminology and theories
- Include more quotes and references
- add more books for research
- Talk about Cohens moral panic theory
- Add more context about news values.
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